Story Development, Editing & Consulting

For Authors & Screenwriters
Ready to Take Their
Work Further.

I help serious fiction authors and screenwriters transform good ideas into compelling, professionally developed stories.

Through developmental editing, line editing, and story consulting, I combine the storytelling principles of fiction writing and screenwriting to strengthen every layer of your work.

The goal: stories ready for publication and production.

Unlike traditional editors and consultants who often specialize in only one medium, I understand how stories work across both books and film. This allows me to identify deeper issues with character, pacing, structure, dialogue, emotional impact, and audience connection that a single-medium approach may miss.

With experience as a writer, editor, and filmmaker, I combine the strongest tools of publishing and screenwriting to strengthen the elements that make stories unforgettable. For authors, I bring a cinematic storytelling perspective that strengthens pacing, imagery, scene impact, and reader engagement. For screenwriters, I bring a deeper understanding of character development, emotional complexity, and narrative depth that helps create stories audiences truly care about.

72 hrs
Typical minumum turnaround
30+
Bestselling books edited
12
Films produced
Jacqueline Cyr at her studio table, reviewing a screenplay manuscript

Jacqueline Cyr

Story Consultant & Editor

The Diagnosis

Common problems clients face — and how I solve them

See the most common challenges writers bring to the table, why they happen, and the way through them.

The Advantage

How this saves you time, money & effort.

For authors, I bring a cinematic storytelling perspective that strengthens pacing, imagery, scene impact, and reader engagement. For screenwriters, I bring a deeper understanding of character development, emotional complexity, and narrative depth that helps create stories audiences truly care about.

01

No More "Revision Fatigue"

Most writers spend months circling the same problems. I identify the root cause of your story's failure on the first pass, so your next revision is a step forward, not a step back.

02

One Expert, Not Five

Forget paying for a line editor, then a structural consultant, then a screenplay expert. I provide an integrated analysis that fixes character, dialogue, and structure in one go.

03

Faster Creative Momentum

Traditional processes stall your work with weeks of waiting. I provide deep-dive feedback at professional speed, keeping your creative energy high and your project moving toward publication or production.

02

Two lenses. One story.

Story development, editing, and consulting for serious fiction authors and screenwriters preparing for publication or production.

This isn't generic feedback or surface-level editing. I don't just point out problems — I uncover why your story isn't working and provide practical solutions to strengthen every layer of your work.

Developmental EditingLine EditingStory Consulting
ServicesChoose your path

Are you an author or a screenwriter?

Select your craft below to reveal the full scope of editing and consulting services tailored to your work.

Every engagement is both editing and consulting — the writer’s heart and the producer’s eye applied together. Not surface notes. Solutions, on every page.

The Service Promise

Whether your target is a bookstore shelf or a production slate, I optimize the elements that make stories unforgettable: complex character psychology, cinematic scene pacing, authentic dialogue, and the emotional resonance that turns readers into fans.

Don’t just edit your story. Develop it into its strongest version.

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The Story
Development Process.

A simple, collaborative process designed to understand your story, identify what it needs, and create a clear path toward making it stronger.

01BEGIN

Share Your Story

Begin by submitting your story details.After reviewing your project information, we’ll schedule a free initial consultation to discuss your goals, challenges, and how I can best help strengthen your story.

  • Logline or story synopsis
  • Genre & project details
  • Page or word count
  • Current challenges & goals
02ASSESS

Consultation & Strategy

  • Creative consultation
  • Story problem diagnosis
  • Recommended services
  • Custom project roadmap
03REFINE

Story Development

  • Developmental editing
  • Line editing & refinement
  • Story notes & solutions
  • Ongoing creative support
Get in touch

Ready to begin your story’s next draft?

Tell me about your project and what your story needs. You’ll hear back, personally, within one business day.

Submit for Diagnosis
Testimonials

Client voices.

Script Consult
Having a producer give insight into my script is a great experience and honestly I’m loving it because I feel it’s truly enhancing the story.
C.K.
Shelf

Published, on the shelf.

Titles that passed through the studio — edited, refined, and sent into the world. Each links to its home on Amazon.

The master's studio — hands working over a manuscript
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One Story.
One Strategy.
One Creative Partner.

Most editors specialize in one medium. Some know novels. Others know screenplays. My experience spans both.

I’ve written, edited, adapted, consulted on, produced, and directed stories across books and film, giving me a holistic understanding of storytelling that goes beyond grammar or formatting. I understand how character, pacing, structure, dialogue, worldbuilding, and emotional impact work together to create stories readers can’t put down and audiences don’t forget.

Because I approach stories from multiple perspectives, I can identify the root causes behind issues that leave writers stuck and provide a clear roadmap for strengthening every layer of the story.

My experience includes editing more than 20 Amazon books for a bestselling author, adapting a book series into a feature film, consulting on and producing award-winning films, and directing more than 20 film and video projects. I’ve worked with clients across the United States, the United Kingdom, and Australia.

I studied screenwriting under Bill Marsilii, writer of Déjà Vu, and Chris Riley, author of The Hollywood Standard, bringing proven storytelling principles from both publishing and Hollywood into every project.

When you work with me, you’re not just hiring an editor. You’re partnering with someone who understands stories from multiple mediums and is committed to helping yours become its strongest version.

Bestseller Editor

Edited more than 20 Amazon books for a bestselling author across fiction, fantasy, sci-fi, thriller, and literary fiction.

Produced Filmmaker

Consulted on and produced award-winning films; adapted a book series into a feature film.

Studied Under Masters

Trained in screenwriting under Bill Marsilii (Déjà Vu) and Chris Riley (The Hollywood Standard).

Cross-Medium Versatility

Directed 20+ film and video projects; clients across the United States, the United Kingdom, and Australia.

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Versatile across
every medium.

From screenplays to novels, from sword-and-sorcery to quiet literary drama. The craft of story is medium-agnostic; the logistics are not. You get fluency in both.

01Genre

Fantasy

Worlds built to bear weight

02Genre

Sci-Fi

Ideas with a human spine

03Genre

Thriller

Tension that never blinks

04Genre

Drama

Stakes of the soul

05Genre

Horror

Dread engineered precisely

06Genre

Romance

Chemistry with consequence

07Genre

Literary Fiction

Voice as architecture

08Genre

Mystery

Promise, pay-off, proof

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Direct line
to Jacqueline.

No chatbots. No intake bots. No junior pass-off. Tell me about your story, where you're struggling, and what you want to accomplish. You will hear back, personally, within one business day.

ResponseWithin one business day
CapacityOne story at a time
PhilosophySolutions, never just notes
Jacqueline Cyr

Story Consultant and Editor · Human-Only · © 2026